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Too much LSD for this child by *JonBeinart:iconJonBeinart:


©2006-2009 *JonBeinart
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Felt-tip pen, Ball-point pen, glue, paper & LSD. Another relic from 2002. I wasn't sure whether to upload this as a Drawing or Collage as it is all hand drawn, but layered like a collage. I find this one too busy, but a perfect reflection of my scattered mind in my LSD days. I don't take Drugs anymore, so this one is sentimental, though I don't think it works as a piece. Feel free to Tear this one apart too. Some good old fashioned constrructive criticism is in order.

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:iconsupremeheifer:
very Brett Whitely-esque... i quite like it. the thing i like about your stuff is every time you look at you see something new. fun! :)

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:iconjonbeinart:
Thankyou. I like Brett Whitely

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:iconelgaris:
Wow, very complicated...

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:iconjonbeinart:
Abit too complex if you ask me

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:iconsupremeheifer:
yeah, he's awesome!! :) once again, too much lsd probly lol

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:iconsbaraci:
I like it but since you asked for old fashioned criticism i will dish it out :P I find it interesting the way your mind works i just with that the composition is a bit more balanced at this point in time my eyes are drawn too much to the left and i would have liked it to be more balanced on all sides. It is not only in amount of the things portrayed but also in intensity and density. The red eyebrows, and brown bits i think would be better left grey or black Since they do distract and bite eyes a bit. I find them more as an afterthought. I absolutely love what you have done with the left hand side bottom. I think whole piece would benefit from a bit trimming from top and right side i think it would improve it quite a bit making it amazingly good. your imagination trully did run wild, and twisted, i like all the forms just popping out and melding into each other. This is beautifull and psychadelic. Keep it up I am very happy you have posted it.

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:iconzeallot:
I think the composition is well balanced despite what someone else said...if you stuck a diagonal line through it...you'd see that it is a contrast of dark and light...or it could have a fading out effect...and about the color...it think it's neat...and I think you should have added more of that rather than make it gray...it gives you something to look for.

I love it.

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sometimes the complexity of the work keeps the eye moving around the piece trying to see everything, which i don't consider to be a bad thing. what helps this piece is the fact that everything in it is consistent...faces and body parts! what can i say....i like it!! :D
:iconheokawolf:
i like it, but i think i just had a flash back.:psychotic:
i used to do alot of this type of stuff myself.

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:iconelgaris:
Yeah, and that's why they call it surreal art :P

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